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The Scorpion’s Gate by Richard A. Clarke

Rating:

***

 

(Recommended)

 

 

 

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Stinging

 

There’s one overwhelming reason for reading Richard A. Clarke’s first novel, The Scorpion’s Gate: the knowledge, perspective, and experience of the author. Clarke spent thirty years as a civil servant, and advised four presidents on security and terrorism. He resigned in 2003 to write a work of non-fiction, Against All Enemies, about the war on terror (we rated that one three stars in June 2004). Freed from all constraints in choosing fiction, we gain Clarke’s insight about the Middle East by him setting the novel in 2010, and through his creative portrayal of individuals holding key roles (like a Secretary of Defense who stifles all debate). Here’s an excerpt, from the beginning of Chapter 3, “February 2,” pp. 52-58:

 

U.S. Navy, Administrative Support Unit Juffair, Bahrain

 

Brian Douglas drove his own car, a green Jaguar, from his beach villa out of town to the Juffair district, home to ASU Bahrain, as the American Fifth Fleet headquarters was known. The sixty-acre compound was surrounded by a high sand-colored masonry wall. A Marine in combat gear stopped the Jag and directed Douglas to pull into the vehicle inspection lane.

 

“Please open the hood, trunk, all four doors, and back away from the car, sir,” a female Marine with an M16 rifle said, as another Ma­rine approached with a German shepherd. As he stood aside and watched the dog sniff its way through the Jaguar, Douglas heard a helicopter engine getting very close. A matte-gray Black Hawk flared down onto the heliport on the other side of the wall, kicking up a small sandstorm near the soccer field.

 

Cleared to proceed, Douglas drove to the stucco archway that was the main gate. It looked as though it had been left on some Hollywood back lot from the set of Gunga Din. Flashing his Navy-issued ID, Douglas was directed to Building 903, with its typical U.S. Navy gobbledegook signage: “HQ-COMUSNAVCENT”

 

Douglas had no sooner been seated in the waiting room when a large man in a Navy flight jacket bounded into the suite and right up to Douglas. “Brian Douglas, it’s good to see you, you old bloke.” His thinning strawberry blond hair and baby face made him look like anything other than the Fifth Fleet commander.

 

“Come on in, Bri. Ensign, two big mugs of coffee. Just chop­pered in from two days on the Reagan.” The British SIS station chief followed in the admiral’s wake into the cavernous office.

 

“Sorry I haven’t had you over since I got in last month, but it’s been a whirlwind of get-to-know-you meetings up and down the Gulf. I’ve memorized more royal family trees in the last week than I did studying European history,” Admiral Adams continued, moving across the room. “Here, let’s sit at the conference table. You know my N-2, the intel guy here, Johnny Hardy.” The three men sat at the long staff table.

 

“Johnny, Brian Douglas and I first got to know each other back in twenty-oh-three in the Green Zone, chasing bad guys, when I was assigned to CENTCOM staff in Iraq. Hangin’ out together in the HVT Bar out at the airport after hours. He has more embarrassing information on me than you guys in Naval Intelligence will ever have, so whenever he says he needs to see me like he did this morn­ing, he gets right in. I’m here for you. You’re the best ally we’ve got left, almost the only one we got left, right, Johnny?”

 

“Well, Admiral, I appreciate your willingness to see me on such short notice.” Douglas looked down at the giant coffee mug, to which somebody had already added a great deal of milk.

 

“You’ve been stationed in Bahrain for a while. Real expert on the region. How long you been here now, Brian? Tell Johnny your ca­reer,” the admiral said as he reached for the tray of cookies.

 

“Well, sir, as you know, I served here as a station officer during Desert Storm, then Baghdad after the Second Gulf War, now back here as SIS station chief for Bahrain, Qatar, Oman, and the United Arab Emirates. I’m completing twelve years in the Gulf, ‘fraid to say.” Douglas tried to sound modest.

 

“You must like it here in Bahrain.” Captain Hardy dunked a la­dyfinger in his mug.

 

The admiral jumped in. “Lots of people do. “Hell, I wouldn’t be an admiral without Bahrain. They came up with the word amir, meaning the guy in charge of the dhows. Shit, they were sailing dhows to Africa and India when we Anglo-Saxons were still painting ourselves blue and fighting the Romans.” He turned to Douglas for affirmation.

 

“I think it may have been my people, the Picts, who painted them­selves blue, but yes, this is a very ancient, well-fought-over piece of turf. Which is why I wanted to see you, sir,” the station chief said, trying to get the conversation back on track.

 

“Yes, Brian, you’re not here to discuss history. What’s up?” Adams sat back in the chair at the head of the table and focused on his guest.

 

“I’ve already been on to your embassy and told my brethren from the Agency, but I wanted to pass it directly to you as well.” Brian Douglas withdrew a paper from inside his suit coat and read, “Highly reliable SIS sources have revealed that the Iranian Qods Force has designated ASU-Bahrain as a target for a terrorist-style at­tack, probably within the next four weeks. The sources also reveal that Iran may be planning to stimulate a Shi’a uprising in Bahrain, as it attempted to do in 1996 and 2001.” Douglas passed the paper to Captain Hardy, thinking of how successful his monitoring of Ahmed Rashid had been.

 

“Interesting. You’re the second group to tell me today that my little base here will be the target for an attack. That’s why we are on a high force protection status, Threatcon Charlie. Of course, I did that myself after the Diplomat and Crowne Plaza attacks.” Admiral Adams took the report from his intelligence officer. “But the Pentagon seems to think the attack will be carried out by agents of Islamyah.”

 

The British spy coughed and sipped the heavily milk-laden coffee. “With all due respect to the Pentagon, the import of our report is that Tehran may be intending that you believe the attack comes from Riyadh. But Riyadh? Their lot couldn’t stage a successful attack on the ASU. Al Qods is capable of it. Moreover, and this is not in what we gave Washington or the Agency here, we have reason to believe that Is­lamyah knows that the Iranians are setting them up to get the blame.”

 

“Well, whoever it is, they will have a hard time. This place is but­toned up tight, Admiral,” the N-2 asserted.

 

“Maybe, Johnny, maybe, but any place can be struck. I can step up protection, but the way to handle this is to get them before they get us.” The admiral leaned across the table toward Douglas. “Can the Bahrainis do that? Can you and the Agency find these guys, who­ever they are?”

 

“The Bahraini Security Service is very good, SIS-trained.” Douglas smiled. “And we and the Agency each have our own sources as well. If we can find the attack team, the Bahrainis can wipe them up.”

 

“I also have SEALs and a Fleet Anti-Terrorism Security Team here if they need any help.” Brad Adams got up out of his chair. “They prefer the offense to sniffing around diplomats’ Jags.” Brian laughed; Adams had done his homework. As they walked to the door, Adams changed his tone and style. He said softly to Douglas, “We can’t have another Baghdad here. I can’t stand the thought of more U.S. troops KIA. I wasn’t in Iraq as long as you, but you re­member those nights out at the HTV, drinking away our sorrows with the Agency guys and the Special Forces. I was there two years, working the Sunni insurgency, trying to counter the Iranians.”

 

“Bloody mess, tragedy really,” Douglas said as he looked at the floor and shook his head.

 

“Yes, yes it was, Brian. I thought it was the right thing to do. Shit, everyone thought they had WMD. But with us gone, it’s still a mess. The Shi’a aren’t going to be able to put down that Sunni insurgency. It’s been going on for years and no sign of letting up. The Kurds are probably going to formalize their independence and then we’ll see what Baghdad tries to do about that. They won’t let Kirkuk go. It’s all been an awful waste of men and money. And for what, so that Iran can tell the democractically elected government of Iraq what to do?” Brad Adams was not playing the part of an American admiral now. “Listen, Bri, I’m supposed to leave tomorrow for a week in Tampa and Washington. Should I go or is this attack on the base here going to happen that fast?”

 

“I’m leaving for London tonight myself, Brad. We think it’s a couple of weeks off, but we can’t find any sign of an Iranian al Qods Force here in town yet, just reports. If we find out otherwise, we’ll shoot up a flare.” Douglas was thinking he was glad to be working again with this big Baby Huey—looking American sailor. He was Ivy League, not off the Annapolis cookie-cutter assembly line, and he had proven again and again in Iraq that he could be trusted, and could get things done.

 

As Brian Douglas drove out through the Hollywood stage-set archway, a second armored Humvee was pulling into place. The Marine sticking through the roof cocked the M60 machine gun and pointed it down the access road.

 

A debut novel rarely garners a three-star rating, and Clarke’s prose contains heaps of opportunities for improvement (dialogue, clichés, character development, implausible plot progressions). The Scorpion’s Gate is recommended for gaining a glimpse into what this former advisor can reveal now that all his constraints are removed. His pen stings, and he shows a path to improved international relations. He remains apolitical, but has a point of view that’s clear and specific.

 

Steve Hopkins, May 25, 2006

 

 

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